first draft

‘The Glass Menagerie’ in written by Tennessee Williams that is based on his own memory with some changes. It reflects the harsh society during the Great Depression, and how people give up their dreams due to the poor conditions. The story focuses on the character Tom Winfield who dreams to become a writer but instead works in a warehouse because of his family’s poor financial condition. His mother Amanda wants to find a husband for her physically disabled daughter Laura desperately, who is too shy to interact with others, her only hobby is to collect glass menagerie. 

The part that my group (Stella, David and I) chose to act was the combination of Act1 scene2 and scene3. The conversations between Amanda and her children, and how she keeps annoying Tom and Tom is eventually outraged and accidentally breaks Laura’s glass menagerie. Our aim of this performance was to explore the relationship between Amanda and her children, which including Amanda’s disappointment when she hears the fact that Laura has been lying to her about going to school, and also the change in Tom’s emotion from clam to annoyed to pugnacious to his mother. Both scenes show that under the pressure from the harsh reality, every character has their own problem and they all struggle from chasing their dreams.

Throughout the play, all three characters are disappointed at their current situation. Amanda is desperate to let her daughter to get married and keeps reminiscing her braw past. Laura is too shy to communicate to people, so instead, she goes to a walk every night in order to escape from the reality. Tom, a writer who has a big dream, is trapped to work in the warehouse to pay the bills, he is also tired of his garrulous mother. For instance, Tom’s disappointment of life can be shown in Act 1 scene 3 when he argues with Amanda. He says ‘Look mother, do you think I’m crazy about the warehouse? You think I’m in love with the Continental Shoemaker? You think I want to spend fifty-five years of my life down there?’. From this solemn tone, it indicates that Tom is not willing to work in the place that vanishes his dream slowly. 

Tennessee Williams also shows the strained relationship between Amanda and Tom by using aggressive language. For instance, in Tom’s last line when Amanda asks where Tom is going, Tom replies ‘Oh I could tell you things to make you sleepless, you ugly babbling old witch!’ The lexical choice Tom uses to describe his mother such as ‘Ugly’ and ‘Witch’ does not only emphasize Tom’s anger to Amanda, but also his disappointment to the unfair reality and his dying dream. The use of repetition by the author shows the rise in emotions of Tom, as the conversation goes, both Tom and Amanda’s language become more aggressive, as Tom becomes angrier, we can see the use of repetition, such as “House! House!”, “Do you think…do you think…” and “That's very very true”. Also these instances indicate Tom’s increasing madness. 

Bringing the scene onto stage, on February 13^th, Stella Chen, David Dai and I performed our short piece in the black box. I chose to play the character of Tom Winfield. It was challenging to take such a significant character who has a dramatic change in emotions throughout the scene (from calm to angry). However, I treated this experience as a chance to explore my potential of creating drama. Since I was not in the first scene of the performance, I will only focus on the second scene. 

My character begun the scene by showing Tom’s lack of patience to his mother. Amanda came and tapped my back to tell me to sit straight while I was writing. I turned my head and said ‘Now what are you up to?’ impatiently. Then the emotions started to build up when there was a breaking point where I said ‘House, house! Who pays the rent on this house…’, then after series of arguing, it reached the climax where I totally expressed Tom’s thoughts of his mother and his family by using the dialogue ‘…you ugly babbling old witch!’. From the first few lines where the conversation did not get too intense yet, I controlled my voice at a suitable volume that is not too loud but showed a bit of impatience. In addition, in the first line before I said ‘Now what are you up to?’ I looked back slowly with a facial expression of tiredness and stress in order to show my unwillingness to listen. As the conversation gets intense enough to the breaking point where I was triggered by Amanda saying ‘Her house’, I stood up from the chair quickly and immediately raised my volume. Also, in order to show my anger, I fisted my left hand and pointed at Amanda with my right hand, and started breathing heavily. The theme of hopelessness was shown at the end when I left the room, I grabbed my coat from the hanger and swang it widely. I accidently hit the glass menagerie to the ground which was originally on the table, and broke it. All three characters looked at the menagerie with a facial expression of surprise and antsy. 

After hours and hours of discussion about what kind of setting on the stage we will have, we eventually decided to keep it as simple and possible so that the audience will only focus on the acting and will not be distracted by the fancy lighting or costumes. There were only two shots of light, one on Tom and the other one was on Amanda and Laura. The blackout during the performance indicated the switch between two scenes. For staging, it was simply two chairs, two tables, one hanger and one typing machine. 

Playing the role of Tom was relatively challenging for me since I don't have any personal experience of facing the poor condition and the harsh side of the society, so I could not use Stanislavsky’s method (relate the story of your character to your own experience). But after a long time of practicing and the help from my teacher and groupmates, I eventually conquered the difficulties. The process of analyzing the relationship between Amanda and her children really helped me to learn how create drama by using changes in voice and body language. Overall, it was a great experience.