After this draft, I realized that there are lots of aspects of the performance of my group and I need to work on. First, I need to have more movement on stage. When I watched the draft, I did not have any movement, all I did was sitting in the chair, which will make the play looks boring. Also, as a group, we definitely need to work on our lines more. Because we are not familiar with our lines and the order of lines, we skipped some, which will lead to wrong lighting and music. In addition, I need to work on my voice too. Because it is a monologue, it is hard to show my full emotions. Therefore, it is extremely important to use my voice to show. Despite our weaknesses, we did have some good parts in this draft. For example, our ending is really perfect. It summarizes the play really well and adding our emotions in it even made it more lively. Overall, I am not fully satisfied by this draft, so I need to work even harder and practice more with my group members to build up the chemistry....