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There are multiple things we need to work on in order to improve the performance as a whole. First of all, instead of divide the stage into two parts, we will combine the two and separate the two scenes by simply using a blackout. Also, I think our props such as tables and chairs should be a bit closer to each other. Acting wise, there are a lot of things we need to improve. Firstly, we need to cut some of our lines since the performance is required to be around 10 minutes and ours was 20 minutes, it is also easier for us to memorize them. Secondly, all of us need to work on how to use emotions better in order to express the right mood, David Dai needs to speak with emotion, Stella and I need to control our rhythm. Another important part is that our transition was poor. All of us need to have more movement, during the performance, all of us were just standing still. Adding more transition and movement can make the performance more interesting and changing the pace of walking can also show character’s emotions. 


During the rehearsal, I think maybe we could start with some activities to warm up  in order to develop emotions. Also, we could use Stanislavsky’s technique of ‘the magic if’, so that everyone gets to know their characters more. For acting wise, in my opinion, it is more about repetition, the more we practice the better the performance will be. Lastly, we also need to make sure that when we are speaking, we need to try to face to the audience, in order to show them the expressions.

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